The Meadow

THE MEADOW

Spread
Neath umbilical sky
On nutrient Earth
She stands alone this noon

Surrounding woods
Mountains
Distant structures
Seem to encase the lush green plot
Have taken on a sunny sheen

Then there is this peaceful babbling brook  
                                                 running through
                                 sparkling
                                             wetly whispering

GOD! 
What an ecstatic vision!

But wait!

Come
Lie down on fairy moment’s colorful hay
Smell the wild flowers
Hum a happy tune
Then         Listen!

Oh!
Below!

A wild bacchanal defames all empyrean image

Slither-slide –
Bunnies    mice POP!
Bees      dragonflies
Winged squadrons buzzing BANZAI!

A billion glassy eyes of every size
Looking for kill
Or pre-empting demise
Shiny black bugs on nature’s green rug

                   Distant

The sound a staccato wheeze
A high    wire din
Like one hundred tortured violins

Then rise
Return to that simpler view
Smile in wonder
That nothing in nature is static
And wonder what’s going on inside of you?

Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/25/2016 7:44:00 PM
Love this poem. Will be back to read it several more times, let your genius effect me. A Big Fav!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/12/2016 9:16:00 AM
Write to feed and satisfy every sense; a true beauty, Daver:). Strong introduction "...On nutrient Earth She stands alone this noon", feels like an opening to your own powerful opus. Reminds me of "Pierre et le loup"...what does it leave inside? Wonder, and appreciation. Hugs and love to you! Mikki
Login to Reply
Date: 8/10/2016 6:44:00 AM
Amazing one.... Beautifully done....
Login to Reply
Date: 8/7/2016 5:13:00 PM
You zoom in for a very close view and then back out to the simple view of nature. Awesome verse, my friend. Delightful!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/5/2016 4:09:00 PM
This is Awesome Dave, in fact i have experienced every word of this poem, you took me back with your wonderful words.
Login to Reply
Austin Avatar
Daver Austin
Date: 8/6/2016 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, Harry. I'm a nut for trying to show the other side of an image or landscape. Love, daver
Date: 8/4/2016 2:20:00 PM
Mysteriously done--- I was intrigued by your poetry!
Login to Reply
Austin Avatar
Daver Austin
Date: 8/5/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks for the visit. Let's see what you have written. Love, daver
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter