The Matter of Batter

Spreading across a pan so fleet -
what can stop it but the heat
so it won't get any flatter?
Those are my thoughts
on pancake batter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Love little poems like this one. This is great
Crandall Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 6:04 PM
Glad you liked it Andrea!
Rodgers Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:27 AM
Hello David, Well, it sounds like you are a chef ready to serve it up. Autumn Blessings, David, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 6:04 PM
Hi Daniel, I like to make pancakes from scratch. I came across a really good pumpkin one on the Internet which I made a little before Thanksgiving.
Wolf Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 8:40 PM
What a title... What a thought... Batter up! ~ Who Else
Crandall Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 6:03 PM
haha, deep thinking!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 5:19 PM
oh my, overthinking pancakes...that's new :-)
Crandall Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 6:02 PM
haha, I keep writing poems about pancakes. I guess its because I like them!
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