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Ego seeks grandeur, as soul does censure. Darkness veils darkness, stifling consciousness. Love employs no force, to cleanse fissures coarse, so light pays penance, deepening suspense. How long will we wait to walk through heart’s gate, becoming the light, shining within bright? 05-April-2022

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Date: 4/5/2022 8:56:00 PM
"Wrong will be right, when Aslan comes in sight, At the sound of his roar, sorrows will be no more, When he bares his teeth, winter meets its death, And when he shakes his mane, we shall have spring again."
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Date: 4/6/2022 12:19:00 AM
May it be, as you say LL

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