The Masterpiece

If we were the things we loved, then...

I would be the shine in puppies eyes
Or a cuddled kitten's purr,
I would be a great novel or poem
Or, the smell of grandmother's house.

I would be the autumn sun upon my face
And the smell of springtime blossoms too,
I would be an infants cackling laughter
And, his mother's ample breast.

I would be the passion in a rutting Buck
And the pining of the whippoorwill's call,
Or the chipmunk that dashes across my yard
And, the morning hawk that catches him!

I would be the scent before an evening shower
And the distant rumble of a storm,
Or a sea shore on a morning's walk
And, a painted evening prairie sky.

I would be a swirling murmur of starlings 
And the evening chant of tree frogs,
I would be the smell of my mother's cooking
And, the sound of my children's laughter.

If we were the things we loved
Then I would be all of these, and more
But I'm not, instead I'm just me
They're the brushstrokes of the masterpiece...

And I, but the eager canvas.



Timothy I. Brumley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 28, 2017 at 7:15 AM
I really enjoy the "matter of fact" way you write. Your poetry, at least what I have read so far, is every day, it is the normal, the things we see but don't absorb, the initials carved in a sidewalk that to some are merely vandalism but to the artful eye, something beautiful and lasting. Bravo, another great piece of writing and definitely a masterpiece.
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March 28, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Thanks Chris :) A great writer once said that a writer should write what he knows which is what I try to do.
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March 28, 2017 at 6:54 AM
And on your canvas you painted for us delightful pictures that shine in our mind's eye. An enthusiastic 7:) Amitiés
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March 28, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Thanks Anne, 7 is good but read on my peruserby, read on.
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