The Masterpiece

    Page after page up in flames
      of his first and last novel
    For he just couldn’t get it right
      though he tried with all his might 

    Canvasses of nocturnal life
      he slashed them with a knife
    For he couldn’t create them ex nihilo
      couldn’t quite capture the moon’s pale glow

    On the cusp of suicide
      for all else he had surely tried
    At last the searcher realized

    The only masterpiece man needs
      is the one recorded high upstairs
        in ‘His Book of Good Deeds’
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Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 4:12 AM
Appropriate title ~ love this poem. Bravo!
Greenhough Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 8:16 PM
A good poem. I possibly also ripped up the Book of Good Deeds.
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 8:45 PM
Aw, Hilda. I'll send you another book, ok?
Lawless Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 7:08 AM
I curtailed my activities when I was told "no good deed goes unpunished".....
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 10:53 PM
So true Gershon, man will be judged on his good deeds when his time comes, and if he hasn't started writing it yet then he should start now because the clock is ticking. Tom
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 8:44 PM
That's right! Thanks for the insightful comment, Tom.
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