The Martyr

I shall weep for fallen angels I shall weep when there are no more my thirst cannot be quenched from empty wells I shall weep for fallen angels their deeds will leave this story to tell ships to heaven can’t run ashore I shall weep for fallen angels I shall weep when there are no more

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The Situation

Date: 6/27/2023 7:31:00 PM

simple. I've been studying angels. for example Uriel.

Ricky Muse
Date: 6/28/2023 10:17:00 PM

I had just discovered the triolet when I wrote this. The words seemed to come from nowhere. Thanks for stopping by..........................peace!

Sarah Ann Jullion

Date: 6/5/2023 3:19:00 PM

Well said. Thank you.

Ricky Muse
Date: 6/12/2023 9:45:00 AM

Triolets are cool. Thanks Sarah................peace!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/12/2021 10:12:00 AM

A fine triolet Ricky, and I love the line "...ships to heaven can't run ashore..." A very sad time when there are no more, and deserving of our tears. Linda

Ricky Muse
Date: 11/12/2021 8:52:00 PM

Thanks Linda. The triolet is a great tool for poets. Be safe, be blessed.