The Marrow Thief

My gardening proclivity was widely recognised,
A gift to which my friends would all attest ;
A nuance of distinction in the flavour and the size
Produced a crop a cut above the rest.

A sorry saga started though when carrots disappeared
Then lettuces were strewn across the ground.
And in the barren garden which was once my pride and joy,
No sign of vegetation could be found.

So when my monster marrow met the same disastrous fate,
I hid from sight to catch the brazen thief
And peeping through the aperture within my garden shed
I viewed the scene with utter disbelief!

My neighbour's rabbit sat there somewhat swollen now in size,
Such brash temerity left me aghast!
And then I heard its owner speak these words in gleeful voice:
'The village trophy shall be mine at last!'

23/11/18
Eight Word Challenge-9 Poetry Contest : sponsored by John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/26/2021 10:34:00 AM
So witty, Wendy! Some bunny( sorry about the pun) wants to win no matter the means! John was correct - playful is a great description. This write flows lyrically! Congrats and kudos! Sorry about your garden. As they say in baseball - next year!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/26/2021 10:59:00 AM
Oh I'm glad you enjoyed the tale,Sam and thanks forcommenting. Pure fiction as no-one is going to attest to MY gardening skills!
Date: 4/13/2020 1:22:00 AM
Wendy, I so enjoyed your witty write with its playful tone, especially the ending when the plot (pardon the pun) is uncovered! Stellar flow and rhyme as is your signature trait, what I always look forward in my visits to your poetry garden. Congratulations on your win!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/13/2020 2:14:00 AM
Morning, John. I enjoyed the word play in your kind feedback! This was one of John Hamilton's tricky 8 word challenges so I'm glad that you appreciated the flow of the poem and it didn't sound forced. There were some excellent examples in the winners list.
Date: 12/2/2018 9:19:00 AM
Wendy, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words .. Congratulations on your win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/12/2020 1:26:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment,Eve.
Date: 11/30/2018 8:52:00 PM
A great story using the required words in your clever, well-written poem, Wendy! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Watson
Date: 12/2/2018 3:08:00 AM
Thank you,Sandra. The other entries were amazing so I'm grateful to have been 'recognised' for this lighthearted offering!
Date: 11/27/2018 9:47:00 PM
Congrats Wendy on a fine win!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 12/2/2018 3:09:00 AM
Thank you,John. 'My heart has found a home' was wonderful to listen to!
Date: 11/27/2018 8:13:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Wendy - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
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Wendy Watson
Date: 12/2/2018 3:16:00 AM
Thank you so much,Gregory! Mine was very light-hearted in comparison to all the other amzing entries including your own.
Date: 11/23/2018 5:36:00 PM
Very nicely done! Good luck in the contest. I was in the middle of it when I realized what words you were intentionally using, as they flowed so eagerly naturally.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/12/2020 1:25:00 PM
How kind. Thank you,Caren.
Date: 11/23/2018 3:01:00 PM
Well done, Wendy. Great poem.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 4/12/2020 1:25:00 PM
Thanks,Line.
Date: 11/23/2018 2:29:00 PM
ooh I wasn't expecting it to the be wabbit but the owner sabotaging the garden ... but I guess in a way they did lol:-) good luck in the contest, you wove the words in so cleverly:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 4/12/2020 1:26:00 PM
That's very kind. Thanks,Jan.
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