The Marrow Thief

My gardening proclivity was widely recognised,
A gift to which my friends would all attest ;
A nuance of distinction in the flavour and the size
Produced a crop a cut above the rest.

A sorry saga started though when carrots disappeared
Then lettuces were strewn across the ground.
And in the barren garden which was once my pride and joy,
No sign of vegetation could be found.

So when my monster marrow met the same disastrous fate,
I hid from sight to catch the brazen thief
And peeping through the aperture within my garden shed
I viewed the scene with utter disbelief!

My neighbour's rabbit sat there somewhat swollen now in size,
Such brash temerity left me aghast!
And then I heard its owner speak these words in gleeful voice:
'The village trophy shall be mine at last!'

23/11/18
Eight Word Challenge-9 Poetry Contest : sponsored by John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kauffman Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 10:34 AM
So witty, Wendy! Some bunny( sorry about the pun) wants to win no matter the means! John was correct - playful is a great description. This write flows lyrically! Congrats and kudos! Sorry about your garden. As they say in baseball - next year!
Watson Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Oh I'm glad you enjoyed the tale,Sam and thanks forcommenting. Pure fiction as no-one is going to attest to MY gardening skills!
Watt Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 1:22 AM
Wendy, I so enjoyed your witty write with its playful tone, especially the ending when the plot (pardon the pun) is uncovered! Stellar flow and rhyme as is your signature trait, what I always look forward in my visits to your poetry garden. Congratulations on your win!
Watson Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 2:14 AM
Morning, John. I enjoyed the word play in your kind feedback! This was one of John Hamilton's tricky 8 word challenges so I'm glad that you appreciated the flow of the poem and it didn't sound forced. There were some excellent examples in the winners list.
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Wendy, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words .. Congratulations on your win.
Watson Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 1:26 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment,Eve.
Haight Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:52 PM
A great story using the required words in your clever, well-written poem, Wendy! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Watson Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 3:08 AM
Thank you,Sandra. The other entries were amazing so I'm grateful to have been 'recognised' for this lighthearted offering!
Hamilton Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:47 PM
Congrats Wendy on a fine win!
Watson Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 3:09 AM
Thank you,John. 'My heart has found a home' was wonderful to listen to!
Barden Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Wendy - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
Watson Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 3:16 AM
Thank you so much,Gregory! Mine was very light-hearted in comparison to all the other amzing entries including your own.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Very nicely done! Good luck in the contest. I was in the middle of it when I realized what words you were intentionally using, as they flowed so eagerly naturally.
Watson Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 1:25 PM
How kind. Thank you,Caren.
Gauthier Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Well done, Wendy. Great poem.
Watson Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 1:25 PM
Thanks,Line.
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 2:29 PM
ooh I wasn't expecting it to the be wabbit but the owner sabotaging the garden ... but I guess in a way they did lol:-) good luck in the contest, you wove the words in so cleverly:-) hugs Jan x
Watson Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 1:26 PM
That's very kind. Thanks,Jan.
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