The Mark Made His Fall

Concealed, never moving a muscle 
Waiting, yes waiting for the mark 
Visualizing the spot of entrance 
Yep, hitting the ball out of the park 
For hours just watching and waiting 
But soon there would be a dividend 
Another enemy biting the bullet 
The target never seeing this weekend 
Movement, what the hell do you mean? 
No movement, no flinch, no stretch 
Noises, better not be any about me 
Like a mouse and a cat playing catch 
Eye contact, yep I see him 
All decked out with ribbons and all 
Just one bullet in his temple 
As another enemy general takes his fall 
Months and months of preparation 
For a second of glory in time 
As songs comes echoing into me 
And bells that ring, no sweeter chimes 
Confusion, yes there’s always confusion 
Which means I must scamper out myself 
Or else I’ll lose my only head 
As it will wind up on someone’s shelf 
Victory, I’m back at base headquarters 
Another victim has taken the fall 
Just like Humpty Dumpty in the book   
This mark finally made his fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/2/2014 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Tim appreciate those words of encouragement.
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Date: 3/2/2014 8:20:00 AM
This is really good Will...I truly enjoyed it .... Tim
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