April Walter Skyy Poet Blank verse

The Mark

You captured my heart
  when I first looked at you
It was no way I refused
  your every command
You grabbed my waist
 and pulled me to you
I knew what you wanted
  just by looking into your eyes
you seduced me
  I tilted my head to the side
revealing my neck
  you kissed it softly
then started to suck
  Softly at first
then with more force
  leaving your mark on me
then your work was done
 And it was my first passion mark
created with love

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Mary Rotman August 12, 2015 at 8:17 PM Critique is a give and take and learning about each other. As I mentioned before, you do a nice job of building up to it. Just some thoughts. Good luck

Mary Rotman August 12, 2015 at 3:42 PM Vibrant description of a kiss. one question: "It was no way I refuse your every command" Not sure what you mean here. Do you realize that this poem can be read every other line, starting on first or second, and be 2 poems? That's quite an achievement!