The Maple Leaf

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                                          Change comes turning red
                                        Being released floating..wind
                                             Soar glorious heights

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/24/2010 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Rick Parise's contest!
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Date: 9/8/2010 5:31:00 PM
congrats on the win!
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Date: 9/7/2010 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:38:00 PM
lovely haiku, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/6/2010 10:58:00 AM
Hey, nice to see this in the top ten, Sara and congrats to you. I doubt I can see many poems today either, but I am trying!!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:42:00 AM
Ahh one of me favorite trees. Nice HAIKU Sara. Congrats!
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest Sara ;) love Wilma
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Date: 9/5/2010 8:57:00 PM
Great imagery. Many congratulations on this win
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Date: 9/5/2010 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your 11th Place Win in Rick's "Leaf In The Wind" Contest, Sara...Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/5/2010 7:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the 11th place win in the contest, sara
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Date: 9/5/2010 5:46:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, dear Sara. Congratulations on your win. Love, iolanda
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Date: 9/5/2010 5:42:00 PM
Congrats, Sara. Nice going. My prayers are with you. xxx Ralph
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Date: 9/5/2010 5:09:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight with luv... hope Tommy is resting well again..luv..
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:47:00 AM
A most beautiful leaf Sara, and you have captured it with your lovely Haiku >> James
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Date: 8/31/2010 9:06:00 PM
Great Haiku Sara. Lovely painted picture. It's morning over here and I am very hungry at the moment. The word "Maple" made me think of pancakes =) haha.. Always, Farah
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Date: 8/30/2010 10:14:00 PM
Yes, sounds just like a bright fall maple leaf, Sara!
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:13:00 PM
First I want to thank for always taking time out to read and place such wonderful comments. Second this a great Haiku. Love the image and flow. Luv Michael
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Date: 8/30/2010 11:20:00 AM
good one my mommie, are you doing good today?
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Date: 8/30/2010 10:49:00 AM
Oh, I love to see them swirling above the trees in the wind, Sara. I think you captured the true intent Rick was seeking in his contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:51:00 AM
beautiful poems..i love maple :) yeah if you like the guitar you should listen to Govi and Jesse cook ~both of them are wonderful~ :) listenin to them made me wanna learn :)
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:36:00 AM
lovely, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/30/2010 7:47:00 AM
A nice images to create a pen picture of the floating leaf, sara
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Date: 8/30/2010 7:34:00 AM
Beautiful depiction for the contest Sara... good luck ..this one is truly lovely... flowing.. luv your dots for breaks.... and emphasis... good luck as well..luv.. happy week... and more prayers too.. Eric just received his second transfusion... but will be fine so they are saying.. and I am believing..luv..
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