Anisha Dutta Poet Rhyme

The Mansion

THE MANSION

        Mr. Philip wanted to build up a mansion.
       Hindrances put him in adverse situation.
         In short period his dream turned an ILLUSION.

       Construction continued from morning till dark dusk.
       Rusty dust whirling, each worker was on thick MASK.
       Not at all a matter of joke, but too tough task. 
 
         His selection of persons to carry project
         was completely wrong, basically IMPERFECT.
          Plan of building was made by a FLAWED architect.

         Promptness of Mr. Philip lacked reality.
          Materials supplied were of poor quality.
          Supervisor did not even check quantity.

        Shortly FAÇADE and parapet were BROKEN.
       Roof, walls were CRACKED, and building collapsed on one morn.
       Mr. Philip got terrible shock and his heart was TORN.

        
        
    06/20/21

Writing Prompt - Flawed' Contest by La Constance France

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M. L. Kiser June 27, 2021 at 8:59 PM This is a bit eerie when I read it, in light of the recent building collapse in Florida. Well penned, well thought out. Congratulations on your placement.

Shirley Hawkins June 26, 2021 at 9:32 PM Poor Mr Philip. Fun Poem. Thank you for the lovely read Anisha. Congratulations on your win in contest. Take care... Shirley

Constance La France June 25, 2021 at 5:08 PM Anisha, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your poem. Good use of the required words, love _Constance

Christuraj Alex June 24, 2021 at 8:52 PM Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!

Rama Balasubramanian June 23, 2021 at 9:30 PM Read my new poem tainted vision. I have tried to answer your question on non existence of God.

Rama Balasubramanian June 20, 2021 at 11:13 AM Good one! An refreshingly different and interesting take on contest. All the best! Anisha Dutta June 20, 2021 at 9:19 PM Thanks Rama. I have not thought deep like you. I know, this is a funny approach.