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Poetic Form: Curtal Sonnet
Inspired: 2024 January  31
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A soloist Java Sparrow flits, A cathedral canopy of arched branched leaves, The sparkling daylight dances the vast green space, Moss glut rock form protrudes aground sits, Pews of raw design entertain flocks trade eaves, Sparrows respect prompts to spring cascading grace, Heaven gifted natural blessings flow, Dove coos the flock of Sparrow's faithful pace, A breath of peace on Earth nature receives, Bestilled feathers as the sun sets aglow, ~God's Face ...

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Date: 1/31/2024 9:01:00 AM
your poem left me breathless in the way you described such beauty..I especially liked The sparkling daylight dances the vast green space Wonderful images...I felt like I was reading about Heaven :-)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/1/2024 6:17:00 AM
Your creative thoughts, Sara, adds much to the morning sun, Aloh, William

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