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My mother did a lot to drive me to near insanity when I was young. And it made it very difficult for me to form normal relationships or to discuss things with other people. So in my 20s as I started to break out of that, I went on a journey of self discovery of how I actually felt and it started with poetry. This is one of the darker examples. This poem did not have a name until about 10 years ago. 

The Manic Phases

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Sometimes I am a shadow

Casting images upon a wall

Having no effect on life

A curiosity to all

 

Sometimes I am a rock

Moved by others pain

At times like this I wonder at the thought

That I am insane

 

Sometimes I am an animal

Drifting along at whim

Doing things without a thought

Of love of life or limb

 

At times you think you know me

At times you know you don’t

 

Just remember I am all me

Even when I won’t

 

The manic phases – Susan Manley (C) 1985
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 12/28/2023 3:31:00 PM
Lovely rhymes that really capture the essence of what you are expressing. One of the most well written poems I've heard, keep up the great poetry Susan!
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Date: 9/26/2023 12:59:00 PM
1985 I was writing in a journal. This reminds me of; That time of the month. And you just want to be clear about it.
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