The Manchester Ship Canal - Part One

Glancing down from breathless heights,
Amidst climey sighs,
The looming colossus awakens from slumber
And stretches across Thelwalls linear skies.
The hot engines hissing steam -
Recalled from fond memories long back -
Tumbling like huffing little rain clouds
Down from the lofty metal track; 
Wherein brightly painted carriages:
The publicans daughter, the verger,
The magistrate, the chief executive - 
Seated first class, all habitually sat.
Swift grandiose arches, a celebration
Trumpeting the artful masons cunning devise,
Boast loudly of the great towers
Parallelogram of terrific forces:
Crossing over in giant leaping strides.

Here below, like Hercules reclining,
The stoic gates of Latchfords black fortress locks
Lift to brace against the immense swell
Far and beyond the chimming remarks
Of Greenhalls absolute, mechanically proven,
Georgian bell;
When, ensconced within a purpose-built, 
Purple brick tower:
Strikes the centuries old brewery clock
On the twelfth  
Of every God given hour.

A rich bankers cantilever 
Pushes doggedly against opposing, sheer, 
Red Sandstone walls;
Again the mauve and azure rock pigeon claps...
And then...coo, coo, cooingly calls.
Dry buzzing heat blurs over 
The hum of a high noons imcumbent midday;
The coup-de-gras scimitar wing stoops -
To fasten onto its slower-witted prey!

Steeped sides slipping amidst tumbling yellow
Gorse and sporadic flowers
Balk at the foreboding waters edge,
Where, over the denizens swirling bowers,
The resolute little rusting lugger,
Puffing and chugging,
relentlessly dredges and scours;
Churning the murky Eastham silts
That drab Manchester draw:
Into the vast hollowing quays 
On beachless, concrete Salfords industrialized,
High-rise dockland shore.

Through the deepest part of the black 
Channel
A salt grimed hulk smoothly slips...
Attached by a twisted hemp to the tugboat
That hauls the great ships.
Stirred by the bow waves
Flowing and ebbing like currents in time:
From the trough to the peak
The jettison and flotsam climbs -
Before succumbing to powerful undercurrents 
Of irresistible designs!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 8/28/2016 9:49:00 PM
"Wow" how I got a 7 from you after reading just some of yours works I have no idea "John" - but boy oh boy with you I am just in another world - what amazing write ups - I'm just working my way to those chimmy pots - I can't wait . . . ; )
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Date: 9/4/2016 1:58:00 PM
Indiana, It is my great pleasure to read your kind and generous comments - Always very much appreciated! Many thanks. :) john
Date: 8/27/2016 10:17:00 AM
John , I will comment on reading part two, for I was there my friend. God Bless. D.
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Date: 9/4/2016 1:56:00 PM
Hi, Dave. An interesting comment you have left me...I am intrigued - Onto part two! :) john
Date: 4/8/2016 1:09:00 PM
great poem , cant be many written about the manchester ship canal could be unique , live crewe so know a few of the places
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Date: 5/21/2016 3:06:00 PM
Hi, Stephen. Many thanks for the visit and kind comments; my apologies for the long delay in answering...I have been rather busy of late. Very pleased to make your acquaintance - Proud I am to be sure! My very best regards. :) john
Date: 11/29/2015 5:51:00 AM
I had to read this particular poem, (parts 1 &2) the canal being so close to my home. You have outdone yourself my friend! A monumental epic to our beloved canal with rich language and vivid imagery. Well done indeed! Best wishes, Keith 7
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:41:00 AM
Hi, Keith. I am very pleased indeed that you enjoyed my small tribute to this magnificent feat of Victorian Engineering. I have always had a love affair with the Manchester Ship Canal after having sailed its full length when a small boy. Thank you for helping honour the "Old Girl" with your very kind remarks! My very best wishes - as always! :) john
Date: 8/3/2015 5:38:00 PM
An epic poem indeed John...I watched those ships from time to time, gliding as if on wheels through the puzzled countryside...thank you...Peter
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:01:00 PM
Brilliant line of poetry you have penned here, Peter! Yes indeed: It is rather surreal watching them glide along pulled by the sturdy little tugboats past shops, roads and houses as if drifting on smoke...Its really quite lovely. Best regards, Peter! :) john
Date: 7/11/2015 11:38:00 AM
What an incredible masterpiece of writing. I love the detail and visuals. I live in Sheffield not far away. I once stayed in an apartment at Salford keys, overlooking Man u football ground.. Such a pleasure to read. Excellent. Pwte.u
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Date: 7/11/2015 12:28:00 PM
Hello, Peter. Proud to make your acquaintance I am sure! Pleased you enjoyed the read. There is, of course, a little bit of "poetic licence" involved here and there (as with most poems) but it is pretty much to the truth. Many, many thanks! All the very best, Peter!! :) john
Date: 7/2/2015 10:19:00 PM
You are one of the most descriptive writers here at Soup and this is proof of it, John. masterfully done!
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Date: 7/3/2015 1:44:00 PM
Hi, Andrea. I hope you are keeping well and everything is going smoothly for you. As always you honour me with such lovely comments - many, many thanks! I really do appreciate your kind remarks! I am pleased you enjoyed the trip down "The Manchester Ship Canal"...After all these years it still holds me fascinated every time I cross it. My very best regards, Andrea! :) john
Date: 7/1/2015 9:17:00 AM
John, I traveled with you here.. =)! Lovely!!!! ~Olive Eloisa =)
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Date: 7/1/2015 4:49:00 PM
Thank you, Olive. It is really lovely to see you visiting me once more. Your kind words are always most appreciated! My very best to you! :) john.
Date: 6/26/2015 9:31:00 AM
Hi JOhn. It's great to read your work once again. You have the unique touch all your own with these kind of writes. One feels transported to that place, letting the imagination flow with your words. Hope to see more of your poems in the coming days. :-)
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Date: 6/26/2015 2:20:00 PM
Kim, it is a real pleasure to see you visiting once again. I hope you are in the very best of health! Thank you for your kind and generous comments - They are very much appreciated! My very best regards! :) john.
Date: 6/23/2015 9:29:00 AM
Another masterpiece. Well done! I see you have written a part two which I'll read now. I m glad to see you're contributing again, John... I thought you had left Soup. Julia, with best wishes.
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Date: 6/23/2015 1:16:00 PM
Hello Julia. It is so very nice to see you visiting once again. I hope you are keeping well! Many thanks for the kind and generous remarks. My very best to you! :-) john
Date: 6/21/2015 12:00:00 PM
John, this descriptive piece held me at captive attention as I imagined myself traveling through the canal. How were you able to meticulously express such detail? I can imagine it was quite amazing during its heyday. I look forward to reading part two. 7
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:43:00 PM
My very dear friend you are always most welcome here! My most sincere thanks - and very best regards!! :) john.
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