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The Man With Blue Eyes

There once was a girl That had beauty and grace Though beaten and broken Had a bright smiling face There once was a girl Who felt aged and wise Her heart was as large As the stars in her eyes There once was a girl Who longed to be loved Though she never quite Found it till the man with blue eyes He was strong and sound He was older and wiser Wipped the tears from her face So trusted the man with blue eyes There once was a girl Who fell for the lies Beliving and trusting The man with blue eyes There is now a girl Her smile erased Her heart splitting and bleeding A lesson she learned From the man with blue eyes

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations onyour poem being featured this week, Patricia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write this week Patricia. Love, Carol

Louzana Nubani

Date: 5/16/2011 7:05:00 AM

Amazing Write ! I loved it, it sets and shows the true nature of a the Man as he imposter's himself to the good, i really like it and Congratulation for featuring this week

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2011 11:46:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Patricia. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Kelleyana Junique

Date: 4/12/2011 12:58:00 AM

My goodness what a thoughtful piece. Life is filled with choices, and sometimes we made or choose the wrong choice, but this is how we learnt from our mistakes. I like each stanza of this poem from the beginning until the end. Very well done, keep on writing, kel.