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The Man Who Was Whole

on your life's journey have you sensed a presence near something you just couldn't see and suddenly you knew no fear... I met a man on the road who could laugh and cry and yet he bore his load never asking the reasons why when with him you just knew something you couldn’t see he would always stand by you as if it was his destiny ever since his birth born on the street he knew his worth it was in his heartbeat he had tales to tell of chance and romance how he rose and fell through his life’s dance the lines from his eyes shaped by smiles and tears said there was no disguise he had lived his years ever since his birth born on the street he knew his worth it was in his heartbeat this man just had soul beating in his heart a man who was whole and when we had to part he said “just love believin and believe in what love brings, there’s no time for grievin if your heart truly sings” ever since his birth born on the street he knew his worth it was in his heartbeat he said “just love believin and believe in what love brings, there’s no time for grievin if your heart truly sings”

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Date: 8/29/2024 5:11:00 AM
refreshing write. congratulations on your win. cheers dear poet.
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Date: 8/30/2024 12:30:00 AM
Thanks for taking time to give feedback cheers LL
Date: 8/29/2024 3:41:00 AM
I love the way you tell a good story, with the repetitive lines to give it valor, a winner in my book, have a great day :)
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Date: 8/30/2024 12:38:00 AM
Thanks for your feedback. If you have SoundCloud, it's been put to music (Larcs Lyrics playlist) bit of a thrill to hear it as a song cheers LL

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