The Man Who Never Was

Last night I dreamt a dreary dream
beyond the clashing rocks 
hiding in a cleft 
I saw a dead man win a fight 
and I think that man was I
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 24, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Nigel, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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November 24, 2014 at 5:28 PM
hey that was pretty neat I like surprises thanks for commenting on my poem you rock keep it up I give two thumbs up
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November 22, 2014 at 5:27 PM
Giving you your 7"
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November 22, 2014 at 5:26 PM
Very cute piece Nigel! Made me smile. A 7 for me! :) Love and light! xxxx D.
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