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The Man That Can

You closed the door and never came back
Then you made me realize the things I lack
I have to open my eyes to see my flaws
I have to open my ears to hear the call
Lead me where it may I will go with faith
I will go easy and confident and I will not be afraid
The days will be long the nights will be cold
I will find the truth wrong and lies so bold
I will fix what I see wrong 
That has been needed for so long
Someday the world be set straight 
And I’m not going to sit here and wait
When you come back I’ll be a changed man 
The one you made realize he can do what no other man can

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Sajdah Al-Riyami Date: 5/27/2009 7:31:00 AM GREAT!* Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 5/23/2009 11:50:00 PM Tyler, congrats on your feature...Raul Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 5/23/2009 4:56:00 PM Congrats Tyler on "the Man That Can" being featured. Vince Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 5/22/2009 2:21:00 PM Tyler, congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane Login to Reply

L'Nass Shango Date: 5/21/2009 6:49:00 AM Brilliant write ... a poem flowered from the soul, congratulations on its being featured this week Login to Reply

Alley Poe Date: 5/20/2009 5:31:00 PM I absolutely agree!!!! Congrats on your feauture..... -Alley Login to Reply

Adeleke Adeite Date: 5/20/2009 9:12:00 AM This piece is very passionate. I love every bit of it… In fact I must say that you’ve got a golden pen…. Sometimes we get rejected for our inadequacies and we learn from such and become a changed person. Someday the world be set strait And I’m not going to sit here and wait When you come back I’ll be a changed man The one you made realize he can do what no other man can. This form of this poem is verse. So change the “I do not know” I will add this to my favorites.Love Leke Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 5/18/2009 10:57:00 AM love the renaissance feel! Jim Login to Reply

Veronica Joseph Date: 5/18/2009 8:59:00 AM Love it. Congratulations. The best gift someone can give us, sometimes, is a good look at ourselves. Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 5/18/2009 6:28:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Ernilando Tugaff Date: 5/18/2009 12:21:00 AM My friend Tyler, congratualtions on your poem being featured this week. I enjoyed reading it. Ernilando Login to Reply

Date: 5/17/2009 5:24:00 PM With faith all things are possible. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 5/16/2009 12:45:00 PM The flow of this poem is excellent. It flows like a songs of praise. Naturally, some are capable of accomplishing what others were unable to do. There is a gift in that, which requires understanding and patience from both sides. Great job and welcome to the Soup! ~Joseph Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 5/14/2009 3:14:00 PM Beautiful poem Tyler, lovely to read, James. Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 5/14/2009 10:07:00 AM a great poem full of dedication, a dedication to be a changed man and with the faith you mention you most certainly can, we can do all things through him that gives us strength, the old saying used to be you can if you think you can but Gods' promise is far greater ad is the truth, you can because God said that you can, Amen my friend, have agreat journey walking with the Lord, God bless you from diane Login to Reply