The Man of the Fields

He was kind and empty 
He had no breakfast, no diploma, and no direction
He had no recognizable achievements but a certain poetry in his manner of talking
He desired no ownership or property beyond that damn guitar 
He liked sleeping in the strawberry fields under the sun because home got too far to walk back to 
He liked kissing beautiful girls 
He liked making himself hurt just to feel something 
Sometimes he felt so much it became nothing at all 

He was a sad person, and if he resonated with you a little too much, a little too long, a little too deep
He would make you sad too 
But not violently sad, beautifully sad
The kind of sad that still allows for occasional glimmers of something new- a melancholic hope 
A flighty hope, but it was real 
And it would make him feel something  

So if you find him somewhere, wrapped in a blanket
Giving you a crooked, nostalgic smile
And he tells you he’s up for anything,
And he tells you that you don’t know how to live in the moment 
And he tells you he can teach you 
Reeking of substance and wasted talent 
And whistling a song that haunts you 

He’ll breath you in. Tell you he smelled your new conditioner and compassionate intentions from a mile away.
Let his eyes pierce through you for a moment, and it will give him comfort
And it will dilute your joy and make you feel momentarily alive 

Remember the beauty of empty shells that have a little depth to them 
Hold him gently like a wounded bird, and nurse him back to health, and peel away his layers until you get to the good part.
He’ll disarm you and make you feel special. 
You’ll remind him that he’s real.
And if you get too sad
Tell him you wish him the best and that you’ll come by some other time 
And you’ll ask where to find him 
And he’ll have no answers
No answers, no breakfast, and no recognizable achievements
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Hardy Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 2:10 AM
It's a deep text, this is speaking of me, it's strange..
Ginger Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 7:24 AM
Thank you, I’m glad it resonated :)
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November 21, 2025 at 1:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ginger Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 2:17 PM
Thanks! It’s great to see there are more believers on this site. God bless you
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