The Man of My Dreams

The man of my dreams is 6 foot tall, The man of my dreams has a round head like a ball.
The man of my dreams is a gentile man The man of my dreams has a really nice tan. The man
of my dreams has no hair at all. The man of my dreams oh did I say he is tall. The man of
my dreams fights for freedom all right, The man of my dreams would put yours out of sight.
The man of my dreams his name Rob, The man in my dreams is not compared to a slob. The man
in my life he like to play games the man in my life his name is James!
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Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 3:21 PM
Wonderful read thanks for sharing and the comments.Teresa
Freakasso Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 8:00 AM
Hi Amber(osia)!I wonder who that lucky baldy is?He's got himself a real kind miss.Nice job amber.Love your thoughts:Keep thinking, Nighty,Night, PRINCE
Sweetheart Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Hi Amber: different and unique ... love the way yur poem flows... men have a way of doing that to women... flowing all the time... thankxxx for your comment about my holiday poem... I luv the holidays too...
Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 5:01 AM
Lovely poem Amber >> James
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 5:19 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amber. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Owens Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 6:43 PM
I like this. Thanks Marty
Culverhouse Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 6:17 PM
ok, sounds wonderful, keep sharing here at the soup pot. welcome!! :)
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