The Man In the Moon - a Polish Fable

I think it's always been there
 just in the back of my mind where 
a moral spin 
 of subtle children's interpretations
 recalled a story told in  Babcis and Dziedzic explanations;
              (grandmas and grandpas) *

Some men and women find themselves in darkness lost
  just like the solitary man in the moon at winter frost,
he or she led a life distorted 
 wallowed in the lust of flesh, greed, lie, and sin
 until one day, the life itself had come to a desperate tragic end;

life's lessons well remembered,
  he or she sought forgiveness from Hell's embers
and the spirit of the Lord heard
 listened hopefully to the imploring words
asking forgiveness for the lessons learned;
  
the answer came with a yes
 but first a life long test
 a message for the rest
be guide, be light
 on every cold December night;

"until time's end, then
   at the apocalypse of noon
 forever be -
the man, the women, learned teacher
 in the face of the moon."




Joseph May
Fabled Musings
2/7/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 3:13 PM
beautifully penned DM, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Hi DM, Congratulations on your HM. Have a great day:-) Alexis
May Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Nicely done DM, Congrats
Fowler Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Love this DM. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Theraven Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 8:30 PM
DM, Life the best of teachers, when we stray. I felt the forgiveness in your words under the guiding moon. -Richard
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