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The Man In the Moon

The man in the moon is so high he feels no need to cry. In space his special place he hears not a single lie. He left one day to forget leaving mother earth behind. Only to get there and stay after clearing his distraught mind. You see his heart is broken leaving him completely numb. His heart was shattered and all that's left no bigger than a crumb. Hurt by a girl who stole his love and tossed it when she was through. So now you know the man in the moon why he's so sad and blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/1/2009 7:55:00 PM
Yes I can see why he's "sad and blue"...enjoyed your poem...Marty
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Date: 11/26/2009 1:12:00 PM
Very sad indeed,,hearetfelt poem--Charma
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Date: 11/26/2009 6:26:00 AM
imaginative write, Jason. Keep em comin! -Robert
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Date: 11/26/2009 3:04:00 AM
Interesting presentation of lost love idea. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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