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the malkavian - chapter one - the embrance - part two

with ravenous intentions, their clothes getting tossed about before retreating to seclusion under virgin white sheets chests heaving, bodies writhing, lips locked and never parting frolicking over and spent, he on his back, her on his chest a few remaining kisses venturing up his chest to his collar the warm breathes expelled from her lips exciting his skin silently baring fangs, she takes hold with both hands and teeth still love drunk, he lies unaware of the life fleeting from him each warm, ichorous mouthful of vital fluid tightening her grip nearly drained, he can feel the fleeting pitter-patter of his heart all the strength he can muster to shed his aggressor is no match his life flashing and vanishing before his eyes bit by bit by bit after drowning herself in several liters of lifeblood, she releases gasping and groaning as she raises up, whipping her gossamer hair back staring paralyzed, his vital fluid running down her chin, neck and chest arms weakly outstretching, lips moving but words having difficulty escaping arms collapsing, eyes closing, labored breathing as death's veil draws near the light of his eyes growing dimmer, dimmer still until all but gone her hardened nail slicing at the wrist of her unnatural pallor stark skin providing a lifeline to her future child, trickling over his pale lips dry mouth opening, tongue slithering to take first taste of his new life in a mere instant, he can already feel a degree of psychosis taking over strengthened and frenzied, he raises up and leeches onto his new sire the holy grail of madness emptying and replenshing his once vacant vessel

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Date: 6/10/2014 8:33:00 PM
Love how she shares her curse with her prey Raven. Hopefully her love will never lose it's taste. That final line is stupendous. She took life, gave life, and will surely attempt to own it. Great experience Raven, thanks. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/10/2014 6:04:00 PM
LOL, Okay I am Here... my e-mail's apoetdestroyer@yahoo.com I'm going to add you to my favorite poet list... I'll be waiting to hear from you again... Linda
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Date: 6/10/2014 6:10:00 PM
I feel honored to be on your Fav Poet's list. Thank you kindly. I'll be in touch. - Raven
Date: 6/10/2014 5:55:00 PM
LOL, Yeah your inbox and my inbox, every time you comment my comment, it's like your tagging me... LOL....
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Date: 6/10/2014 5:57:00 PM
If you want to reach me directly through email than through PoetrySoup.com; you can send it to: universal_migrator@yahoo.com (huge Ayreon fan). Oh... and... tag, you're it! - Raven
Date: 6/10/2014 5:43:00 PM
Malkavian, wow.. This is deep, and bites until the end.. I like the twisted vacant vessel. It's like a plan set in motion. The nails gave it a vampire effect. Love both parts... Linda
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Date: 6/10/2014 5:53:00 PM
There goes that inbox again. -winks- I'm taking my time with the second chapter, but will be putting other pieces up in the meantime. You're always so kind, Linda. - Raven
Date: 6/8/2014 10:17:00 PM
Whoa, what a dark story beautifully told!
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Date: 6/9/2014 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, Dave! I'm currently in the process of putting together the second chapter. If you're interested, I could send you a message to let you know. ;) - Raven