The Maldives

Here we are in an island of ocean
Where leaves of summer sway in motion
Where dew drops glitter in the sunlight
Then feel the evaporation of your plight
Where the blue ocean and nature's greenery
Proves to be and still is a divine mystery
That feeling of freedom is un-explanatory
When u stretch your arms in the amazing scenery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 5, 2024 at 6:56 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 26, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Abdulla, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 4, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Abdulla, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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