The Makeshift Poem 101

The anchor subside the cure of weigh-in waters,
Flowing in the midst of abstract battles,
To be toughest, you can be..
Singing the sirens of sailing
Finding yourself in the tension of negotiating palpable
Bid adieu dreams and swift moving chimera,
Seeing your flaws and wanderings
At the dang skies,
In the worst alarm,
On dates of run on tick tack,
To be toughest, you can be..
In another makeshift adept world to see..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/17/2016 12:19:00 PM
great flow amor
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Amor Otong
Date: 4/28/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thanks Jas! :)
Date: 8/6/2015 11:48:00 AM
This is clever! I enjoyed:-)
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Amor Otong
Date: 8/7/2015 12:03:00 AM
Thanks njeri. :))
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