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The Majestic Butterfly

The sun comes up early in the morning Green leaves turn to bathe in the sun Flower petals open widely and stand proud As the caterpillar slowly begins to wake. She begins Inching along Absorbing her surroundings Soaking in what it means to be "me". She grows In stature, in knowledge In love, in understanding, and grace Painfully she grows through cheers and jeers. She changes Not who she is, but Rather what she is turning into A young, thriving, vibrant butterfly. She blossoms Like a flower's petals She is colorful, majestic, and strong Her beauty will captivate and mystify for ages.

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Date: 12/23/2009 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Amanda. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:58:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Amanda! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:12:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/19/2009 12:59:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:18:00 AM
Lovely Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 12/15/2009 5:08:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:30:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 11:33:00 AM
Lovely Poem! Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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Date: 12/15/2009 10:11:00 AM
Amanda, this is the real thing. carefully writen and thought out. with all the right adjitives. this is book worthy ans worthy to be memorized. that one of my highest compliments. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/14/2009 5:42:00 PM
Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 12/14/2009 3:54:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in this beautiful write, Amanda. Excellent feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations! Hope you have a fine holiday and 2010 is a blessed year for your and yours!!
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Date: 12/14/2009 11:10:00 AM
Amanda - many congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Amanda. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/14/2009 6:36:00 AM
Amanda, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. It seems that butterflies are a powerful image for many of us and can provide inspiration in many different ways. Check out my poem True Beauty of the Butterfly. All the best, Krista
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:39:00 AM
congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 7/10/2009 9:45:00 AM
A most beautiful poem Amanda, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 7/10/2009 9:44:00 AM
wonderful, thoughtful, a jewel of knowledge..please add your skill to the story we are weaving to cheer a sick souper Rhonda Hero...go to my blog and add to our tale...perhaps bring your butterfly! light & Love
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