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Entered in contest; A magical journey contest, sponsored by Constance La France.

The Magical Well

I hold three magic rocks, in my hand
Rolling them over and over and over
Leaving this reality behind, far behind
Remembering that magical day and time

We were young, care-free and in our childhood
When we snuck out back near the woods
We stopped near the old forbidden well
And went on a journey we would live to tell

We knew the well was a dangerous place
and were forbidden to go near its space
That day we saw a tiny gnome appear peeking out
Wearing a large green hat and sputtering about

He held three rocks in his hand that glowed like gold
He rubbed the rocks as he chanted with a firm hold
He saw us and quickly jumped up and into the well
Leaving behind the magical rocks as he let out a yell

We quickly ran back for help and into our home
Not sure if we should tell anyone about the gnome
We told our parents, and they didn’t believe our tale
The next day we snuck back with a rope and pail

We saw the gold rocks, glowing and laying on top
We grabbed the rocks and then time seemed to stop
We entered a magical place with gnomes and fairies
All singing, chanting and foraging for magical berries

We were told that we now must make a special wish
And asked to taste the magical berries on the dish
We each took a tiny bite and then awoke on the ground
We were near the well and couldn’t believe what we found

The stones were now in our pockets to our surprise
And decided to keep all this a secret and our prize
There were two new bicycles along the well wall
And we realized our wishes were granted after all
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Crandall Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 4:03 PM
That's a fun adventure - congratulations!
Allison Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 1:37 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative magical tale. What A Great Picture... Have a great day.............
Kitchin Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Paula, thank you.
Woods Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 6:42 AM
So sweet and fun! Congratulations! Xo
Kitchin Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Crystol, thank you.
Williams Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 4:15 AM
What a beautifully nostalgic and enchanting poem! It captures the innocence and wonder of childhood, transporting the reader into a magical realm where anything is possible. The imagery of the glowing rocks and the journey into a hidden world filled with gnomes and fairies feels so alive, like an adventure we wish we could have experienced ourselves. The way you weave the theme of secrets and wishes granted is truly heartwarming. It’s a story that reminds us of the magic that still exists within us, even as we grow older....Hugs
Kitchin Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Maria, thank you.
Canerdy Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Tania, your story of magic is skillfully written entertainingWAE. Janice
Kitchin Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 4:01 PM
Janice, thank you.
Tor Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 7:18 AM
Wow Tania such a great tale you created in the magical realm. Really enjoyed reading. I wish you well in the contest this one is so impressive.
Kitchin Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Michael, thank you.
Brotherton Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 1:49 PM
Such a magical tale. Every child needs a wishing well
Kitchin Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Jerry, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 10:43 PM
Great tale, Tania. Enjoyed it. Could not respond earlier as I have computer problems. Best for a win.
Kitchin Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 3:14 AM
Victor, thank you.
Allison Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 10:01 AM
what a magical story indeed Tania! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 10:21 AM
Jan, thank you.
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