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Entered in contest; A magical journey contest, sponsored by Constance La France.

I hold three magic rocks, in my hand Rolling them over and over and over Leaving this reality behind, far behind Remembering that magical day and time We were young, care-free and in our childhood When we snuck out back near the woods We stopped near the old forbidden well And went on a journey we would live to tell We knew the well was a dangerous place and were forbidden to go near its space That day we saw a tiny gnome appear peeking out Wearing a large green hat and sputtering about He held three rocks in his hand that glowed like gold He rubbed the rocks as he chanted with a firm hold He saw us and quickly jumped up and into the well Leaving behind the magical rocks as he let out a yell We quickly ran back for help and into our home Not sure if we should tell anyone about the gnome We told our parents, and they didn’t believe our tale The next day we snuck back with a rope and pail We saw the gold rocks, glowing and laying on top We grabbed the rocks and then time seemed to stop We entered a magical place with gnomes and fairies All singing, chanting and foraging for magical berries We were told that we now must make a special wish And asked to taste the magical berries on the dish We each took a tiny bite and then awoke on the ground We were near the well and couldn’t believe what we found The stones were now in our pockets to our surprise And decided to keep all this a secret and our prize There were two new bicycles along the well wall And we realized our wishes were granted after all

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Date: 3/2/2025 4:03:00 PM
That's a fun adventure - congratulations!
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Date: 2/27/2025 1:37:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2025 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative magical tale. What A Great Picture... Have a great day.............
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/27/2025 1:29:00 PM
Paula, thank you.
Date: 2/26/2025 6:42:00 AM
So sweet and fun! Congratulations! Xo
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/27/2025 1:29:00 PM
Crystol, thank you.
Date: 2/26/2025 4:15:00 AM
What a beautifully nostalgic and enchanting poem! It captures the innocence and wonder of childhood, transporting the reader into a magical realm where anything is possible. The imagery of the glowing rocks and the journey into a hidden world filled with gnomes and fairies feels so alive, like an adventure we wish we could have experienced ourselves. The way you weave the theme of secrets and wishes granted is truly heartwarming. It’s a story that reminds us of the magic that still exists within us, even as we grow older....Hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/27/2025 1:29:00 PM
Maria, thank you.
Date: 2/23/2025 12:18:00 PM
Tania, your story of magic is skillfully written entertainingWAE. Janice
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/23/2025 4:01:00 PM
Janice, thank you.
Date: 2/23/2025 7:18:00 AM
Wow Tania such a great tale you created in the magical realm. Really enjoyed reading. I wish you well in the contest this one is so impressive.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/23/2025 4:00:00 PM
Michael, thank you.
Date: 2/21/2025 1:49:00 PM
Such a magical tale. Every child needs a wishing well
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/21/2025 7:03:00 PM
Jerry, thank you.
Date: 2/17/2025 10:43:00 PM
Great tale, Tania. Enjoyed it. Could not respond earlier as I have computer problems. Best for a win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/18/2025 3:14:00 AM
Victor, thank you.
Date: 2/17/2025 10:01:00 AM
what a magical story indeed Tania! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/17/2025 10:21:00 AM
Jan, thank you.

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