Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Imagism

The Magical Forest

Aromatic smokes, abounds the whole land
                               Somewhere, nightingale began it's sound

                        The little girl feast on the beauty before her eyes...

                           A labyrinth of forest trees inviting for a tryst
                          So inquisitive, she went ahead couldn't resist..
                            Each edge of the mysterious green maze
                         She discovered lovely sights leaving her amaze!

                             Sparkling crystal clear waters of a brook..
                              Beckons her feet to dip and take a look 
                                Down are rainbow colored creatures
                                  Kissing and tickling her little toes

                          Magnificent clusters of magnolias and orchids
                            Scattered and tangling intricately on trees
                           Bees drinking nectar's from blossom buds
                              Butterflies caressing each pretty bulbs

                          Deer, squirrels, rabbits and playful monkeys
                     Following biting her skirt, on fine line during the trip
                          Merrily, she starts to recite an upbeat song
                             Swaying freely her arms with the song

                         Then, oh! oh! in instant all around sang along!

                      The rabbits and squirrels joyfully hops and jumps
                        Flying birds producing spiral drumbeat thumps
                         Leaves and branches of trees clap and swing
                           Each one seems jubilant to dance and sing

                                    T--------H--------E--------N....
                                               

         "Riiiiiiiiiiiing! Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing! Rrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing!", Says her alarm clock....


(c) Olive Eloisa
4:54 pm 
03/27/2014
CONTEST: THE MAGICAL FOREST
SPONSOR: ROGER HORSCH
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5th place.... to GOD BE THE GREATEST GLORY.. :D

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Robert Lindley June 22, 2014 at 2:36 PM Love this write my friend!!! " A labyrinth of forest trees inviting for a tryst So inquisitive, she went ahead couldn't resist.. Each edge of the mysterious green maze She discovered lovely sights leaving her amaze!" Wonderful ...... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:41 AM Thank you very much Robert.. :)

Kelly Deschler March 31, 2014 at 12:40 AM This was a very creative and fun write, Olive! I really enjoyed reading your poem tonight. Very nicely done! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 31, 2014 at 3:40 AM Thank you Kelly.. :D to God be the glory as always.. :D

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2014 at 1:18 PM NICE WIN....PD Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 29, 2014 at 1:55 PM THANKS.. :) to God be the greatest glory PD.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta March 29, 2014 at 6:04 AM Enjoyable and creative write, congrats on the fine win, olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 29, 2014 at 1:55 PM THANKS sir.. :) to God be the greatest glory PD.. :)

Roger Horsch March 28, 2014 at 10:27 PM Thank you olive for entering my contest and congrats on your win........Roger Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 29, 2014 at 1:53 PM thank you for giving me a place on your contest sir.. to be God the glory.. :)

Chuck Melugin March 26, 2014 at 5:55 PM Dear Olive, The imagery dances in each line! Beautiful! 7 my best, chuck Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 28, 2014 at 4:02 PM thanks much chuck.. :) to God be the greatest glory.. :D