The Magical Forest

Near an old forest, there lived a motherless girl Named Rose with rosy cheeks and golden curls. Her dad Henry remarried a business woman Hurry As Henry wanted the best for this lonely, sad girlie Not only that, he brought her a puppy called Furry To cheer up, as Hurry used to go out for money. One day Rose didn’t find Furry in the house, was worried Thinking to go to her dad, just then Hurry walked in flurry. She said, “I had been walking Furry and it had run away” Not believing her, in the night Rose took the forest way. It was cold, dark and raining very hard in the forest So Rose Took shelter under a big oak tree for rest. Waking up in the morning, she couldn’t believe her eyes As the trees were talking, they had mouths and eyes. One of the trees bent and said, “I bet you are hungry” A branch shaped like hand, gave Rose a red apple crunchy. Then Rose told her story and the trees listened to her And advised to go to the willow that will help her. Before she could grasp, a cute mouse Chunky appeared “I will show you the way to the willow with cheers. While heading for the forest, Rose saw a hawk in circlet Its eyes on Chunky, Rose put Chunky into her pocket. They reached the lake, The Willow Tree was glad to see her Rose told her story and the tree was pleased to help her. It said,”Chunky was left by a woman, but safe and proper Then it gave her a roll of paper hidden in Chunky’s collar.
It was the Deed of cottage that she hid from Henry The tree sent its eagle to fly all of them without worry. +++++++ March 24, 2014 Form : Free Verse - 28 lines Fourth Place Win Contest: The Magical Forest by Roger Horsch

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Date: 5/8/2014 8:22:00 AM
I have always been interested in magical forests. As a child the forest near our home was just that and your brilliant offering brought back such grand memories! I thank you for such a gift.
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Date: 3/30/2014 12:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this whimsical story, and I loved the rhyming throughout. Well done, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for all of your kind comments.
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Date: 3/29/2014 1:16:00 PM
DR RAM., I love Roger's, super winning list.... Congratulations, on your win. I like The Magical Forest theme.... xox ~LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:00:00 AM
Hi Ram, Enjoyable read. Congrats on your win. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 3/29/2014 10:11:00 AM
Nice story Dr Ram...congrats on the win
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Date: 3/29/2014 6:01:00 AM
Thanks for the comments and my placement in your contest
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Date: 3/28/2014 10:23:00 PM
Nice win Dr Ram, Congrats. Thanks for entering my contest. You've been a good friend in poetry........Roger
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Date: 3/28/2014 10:01:00 PM
wow, this is very imaginative, and with all those cute characters' names. Good win, Dr. Ram. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/25/2014 2:22:00 AM
You have certainly walked us into a magical forest here. A lovely story. I wish you all the best in the competition.
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