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The Magic of the Night

"Keep your eyes open to see the magic of the night" - by Poet Deep into the woods, I walked one day to find flaming fireflies come my way, Watching them, I felt a trancelike peace, fulfillment of dreamlike fantasies; In the shadowy shelter of trees, I stood enjoying the mellow breeze; The hazy clouds were rolling onward, as I 'neath the moon slowly wandered, Crickets and glowworms began to prance, silently, I admired with glued glance, The scenery sure looked surreal, this night encounter seemed unreal; Then I heard the nightingale crooning, o'er imaginary love swooning, Ethereal, her song pulled me in, the joy I felt, none can imagine; Basking in the aura of moonlight, entranced by the magic of each sight, I walked back leaving the woods behind, But this night is engraved in my mind. 05.26.2021 For Constance La France's "Writing prompt - Dreamlike" contest

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Date: 6/3/2021 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. I Love It. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 6/3/2021 7:58:00 AM
Jo, great story and imagery. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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Date: 6/2/2021 3:06:00 PM
Jo, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like your quote too, love - Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful piece of writing - sounds magical as the surreal scenery itself! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 6/2/2021 11:59:00 AM
Beautifully Written. Your works are really great. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:16:00 AM
So wonderfully written, Jo, the symbolism and the wording are so very well chosen; my best hopes for a win.
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Date: 5/26/2021 3:42:00 AM
Well written Jo, there is certainly something magical about the night, we shouldn't fear it. Good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 5/26/2021 2:07:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Jo, an excellent contender for the contest… Belle
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Date: 5/26/2021 1:42:00 AM
Wow, so beautiful a poem for the contest which I hope will earn a high placement. You deserve it. Hugs
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