The Luxury of Breathing

"Breathe. Let go. And remind yourself that this very moment is the only one you know you have for sure."
                                       - Oprah Winfrey


To breathe was once a luxury,
people now gasp in pain;
Death leaves a sigh of drudgery,
tears pour out unrestrained;

Loved ones left behind whisper why,
wonder what lies in store;
Infection rates are getting high,
they need oxygen more;

The murmur of the grave is heard
above the din of life;
Hard to utter another word,
when breathing is a strife;

Grateful to God for every breath,
today we are alive;
Some day, though we too will face death,
hope helps us to survive.


04.29.2021

For Constance La France's "Writing prompt - Breathe" contest
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La France Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 1:53 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with this beautifully penned and emotional poem, we never know when it will be our turn, well done, love _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Yes, hope is always there for us... it's more important than we might imagine. God bless you always, kind friend, Love, Gina
Pandit Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 5:20 AM
I like the message of your poem, Jo. You blended the words given seamlessly.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 1:57 AM
This is a beauty. You used the chosen words quite well. The poem is full of emotion. You did well Best for a win.
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