Harry Horsman Poet Rhyme

The Lure of Venus

A striking splash of iridescent light
The inspiring moon the splendour of night,
So many minds that scan you from afar
Making wishes beneath your shooting star,
My telescope focused I see your face
Oh! Alluring Venus the lure of space.

© Harry J Horsman  2012

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Joe Maverick April 8, 2012 at 11:28 AM Enjoyed reading this harry and congratulations on the win..!

Sashi Prabhu April 5, 2012 at 7:28 AM wow Harry!!! congrats on the placement in the contest...congrats on the win!!!!!!!!!!!!!~sashi

Carol Sunshine Brown April 5, 2012 at 6:02 AM A belated congratulations to you for your win in Paula's "Allure" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2012 at 11:45 PM Harry, I 'm so glad to see this on the winners' list. A big Congrats to you. It was most deserving.

Charmaine Chircop April 4, 2012 at 1:34 AM This beauty goes to my favourites.. I love shooting stars..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 4, 2012 at 12:38 AM Congratulations Harry a beautiful verse xx

Joyce Johnson April 3, 2012 at 11:44 PM Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 30, 2012 at 1:49 PM oh I simply luv this piece Harry luv.. good luck in contest.. that Venus does very well without arms .. grandiose words luv..

Elizabeth Wesley March 28, 2012 at 5:14 AM Each line carries its own magic Harry and when you put them together you give me an astral vision that holds its own enchantment. That first line is so special. Love, Elizabeth

Connie Marcum Wong March 27, 2012 at 12:21 PM Harry, Your first two lines are the lure enticing one to want to read more of this enchanting poem, I loved it!

Doris Culverhouse March 27, 2012 at 5:18 AM gazing upward tonight because of your poem!

Doris Culverhouse March 27, 2012 at 5:16 AM wish I could see the stars more closely....

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2012 at 10:10 PM wow, yours is one of the better ones I"ve read on this topic of allure. I really like it and I hope it does very well in the contest. Wish I could see more but I'm trying to get to all my poet friends who read my poems in my absence.Luv, Andrea

M.I.A . March 26, 2012 at 8:29 PM the lure of venus... yes, i can see your sky! love this. beautiful rhyme