The Lupine Form

Silver lamp of light 
Low howl, longing, louder
Grey form looks upwards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Yes, that is an attractive way to accent you poem, using the words with L sounds, Brahn. Just getting an idea of how you like your haiku or senryu, but I think I didn't see senryu of yours posted!
Bailey Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Yeah, I do not do many senryu's. The only one I have put on here is in another language.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Lovely
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Intriguing...very beautiful!
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