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The Lupine Form

Silver lamp of light Low howl, longing, louder Grey form looks upwards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/10/2018 3:22:00 PM
Yes, that is an attractive way to accent you poem, using the words with L sounds, Brahn. Just getting an idea of how you like your haiku or senryu, but I think I didn't see senryu of yours posted!
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Date: 9/11/2018 8:03:00 AM
Yeah, I do not do many senryu's. The only one I have put on here is in another language.
Date: 8/20/2018 12:21:00 PM
Lovely
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Date: 8/20/2018 10:40:00 AM
Intriguing...very beautiful!
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