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The Lupine Form

Silver lamp of light Low howl, longing, louder Grey form looks upwards

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2018 3:22:00 PM

Yes, that is an attractive way to accent you poem, using the words with L sounds, Brahn. Just getting an idea of how you like your haiku or senryu, but I think I didn't see senryu of yours posted!

Brahn Bailey
Date: 9/11/2018 8:03:00 AM

Yeah, I do not do many senryu's. The only one I have put on here is in another language.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/20/2018 12:21:00 PM

Lovely

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2018 10:40:00 AM

Intriguing...very beautiful!