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The Lunker

Skies ablaze with auburn rays Horizon foretelling the dawn A turtle strays through a lily pad maze We're the first ones on the pond As we paddle along we're singin' a song For the signs are clear to read If nothin' goes wrong it won't be long The fish'll be startin' to feed We hear the sounds, they're splashin' around On water once still as glass And seven pounds are about to be found In the form of a large mouth bass We start to row fast, the buoys zip past We arrive at the secret spot Then at last the pinpoint cast The Lunker is soon to be caught 3/5/05

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 12/9/2013 11:09:00 PM
Sound like a fish story to me but I love it. Can I use it in my magazine? It's Mid-Ohio Valley Poetry Magazine in Parkersburg WV. We pay in contributor's copies. Email me and let me know at marvindschrebe@gmail.com Thanks! I will need your snail mail address.
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Date: 12/9/2013 7:21:00 PM
Do you mean "the buoys zip past" ? I like your poem, but the mispelling threw me a little...keep going...
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:27:00 AM
this is very nice, feels like im fishing with u. i think u really good at it, arent u? :)
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Date: 12/15/2012 10:12:00 AM
Way to go ..Great winner you are..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2012 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Joe xx
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Date: 12/13/2012 10:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest.......Seren
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