The Lunar Effect

Mother moon's effect Born in Father sun's light flow Proud of the child she protects Earth, through night aglow Family affair Ever flow of a dance act In a love embrace so fair Never ending pact Born of God's own flair Causing an attraction play Through the effervescent glare Of the Milky Way. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 02.08.10 Entered in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest, "Luna".

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2010 9:30:00 AM

Aaaaaah, now this one me really likes! Luna poems, always enchanting.

Date: 2/12/2010 7:37:00 PM

Nice use of rhyme for an uplifting view. Your faith shines through this poem in a creative way. Blessings to you for sharing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 2/9/2010 11:40:00 PM

Great atmospheric sequence of poetry,Caroline.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and comments today.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/9/2010 4:28:00 AM

Such wonderful lines bringing this Effect together so well. Never thought of the moon in these terms...but I may now for sure when ere I look up at it! See how a poem can affect a person? never ceases to amaze me. Great job here Caroline. -Robert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2010 3:56:00 PM

Very descriptive and expressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara