Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Choka

The Lunar Effect

Mother moon's effect
Born in Father sun's  light flow
Proud of the child she protects
Earth, through night aglow
Family affair
Ever flow of a dance act
In a love embrace so fair
Never ending pact
Born of God's own flair
Causing an attraction play
Through the effervescent glare
Of the Milky Way.


By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 02.08.10

Entered in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest, "Luna".

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Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2010 at 9:30 AM Aaaaaah, now this one me really likes! Luna poems, always enchanting.

February 12, 2010 at 7:37 PM Nice use of rhyme for an uplifting view. Your faith shines through this poem in a creative way. Blessings to you for sharing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Brian Strand February 9, 2010 at 11:40 PM Great atmospheric sequence of poetry,Caroline.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and comments today.

Robert A. Dufresne February 9, 2010 at 4:28 AM Such wonderful lines bringing this Effect together so well. Never thought of the moon in these terms...but I may now for sure when ere I look up at it! See how a poem can affect a person? never ceases to amaze me. Great job here Caroline. -Robert

Sara Kendrick February 8, 2010 at 3:56 PM Very descriptive and expressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara