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The Lull

Listening to the gurgles of the whirling waterfall, Soothed by the serenity of the still silvery streams, Lulled to sleep by the rustle of pristine palms, I lay beside you in a perfect paradise. Date: 11/01/2021 Liberum Divisa 8 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory R Barden Original Poem: "In My Dream" dated 06/08/2021

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Date: 11/11/2021 2:23:00 PM
Charming picture of blessedness. serene and soothing with perfect alliteration. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 11/11/2021 5:52:00 AM
Beautiful verse Anitha
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Date: 11/7/2021 9:29:00 PM
WHAT A REALLY SPECIAL PERSON YOU MUST HAVE PICKED TO LAY BESIDE YOU IN A PERFECT PARADISE WHILST LISTENING TO THE BEAUTIFUL SOUNDS OF THE GURGLING WATER FALL, THE RUSTLE OF OF PRISTINE PALMS AND ENJOY THE SERENITY OF STILL SILVERY STREAMS, AN EXQUISITE POEM DEAR ANITHA. LOVE AND HUGS JENNY. (SORRY ABOUT CAPS, SOMETIMES THIS HAPPENS AND THEN I JUST LEAVE IT.)
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Date: 11/1/2021 10:47:00 PM
Water sounds have such a soothing effect. Love your alliterative second line and the serene imagery throughout. Beautiful writing, Ani.
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Date: 11/1/2021 2:20:00 PM
Lovely romantic verse Ani, love the tranquil image. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your week ahead. Tom
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Date: 11/1/2021 1:56:00 PM
Much serenity in your perfect paradise. Delightfully romantic place you created, Ani.
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Date: 11/1/2021 11:29:00 AM
Hello Anitha, this sounds like a peaceful place . Hugs.
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Date: 11/1/2021 11:10:00 AM
This evokes peace and quietude. Great poem. Best for a win.
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