The Lull

Listening to the gurgles of the whirling waterfall, 
Soothed by the serenity of the still silvery streams, 
Lulled to sleep by the rustle of pristine palms, 
I lay beside you in a perfect paradise.


Date: 11/01/2021
Liberum Divisa 8 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

Original Poem: "In My Dream" dated 06/08/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Charming picture of blessedness. serene and soothing with perfect alliteration. Love and hugs ~ Mala
May Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 5:52 AM
Beautiful verse Anitha
Proxenos Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 9:29 PM
WHAT A REALLY SPECIAL PERSON YOU MUST HAVE PICKED TO LAY BESIDE YOU IN A PERFECT PARADISE WHILST LISTENING TO THE BEAUTIFUL SOUNDS OF THE GURGLING WATER FALL, THE RUSTLE OF OF PRISTINE PALMS AND ENJOY THE SERENITY OF STILL SILVERY STREAMS, AN EXQUISITE POEM DEAR ANITHA. LOVE AND HUGS JENNY. (SORRY ABOUT CAPS, SOMETIMES THIS HAPPENS AND THEN I JUST LEAVE IT.)
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 10:47 PM
Water sounds have such a soothing effect. Love your alliterative second line and the serene imagery throughout. Beautiful writing, Ani.
Cunningham Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Lovely romantic verse Ani, love the tranquil image. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Pandit Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Much serenity in your perfect paradise. Delightfully romantic place you created, Ani.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Hello Anitha, this sounds like a peaceful place . Hugs.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:10 AM
This evokes peace and quietude. Great poem. Best for a win.
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