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The lucky little mouse

Once there lived a mouse in its own little house... its name was Jerry and lived with merry... It ate yummy berries and cherries and was very hairy... Living in a hole , with his brother, the mole... It used to find cheese with ease and lived in peace. It was scared of cats... because cats eat rats... It lived a happy long life with its seven children and a wife...

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Date: 12/20/2013 4:37:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Saanvi
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Date: 12/19/2013 7:25:00 PM
Cute cute cute..congratulations
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Date: 12/19/2013 11:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Saanvi in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:08:00 AM
Cute one..Great winner...Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:14:00 AM
congrats! hurray!
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Date: 11/25/2013 11:08:00 PM
Saanvi, Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:56:00 AM
Congratulation on being featured. Excellent poetry poet.
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 8/1/2013 11:02:00 AM
THANKS........ :)
Date: 7/31/2013 3:02:00 PM
Seven children and a wife is enough to make any husband happy. Congrats on your featured writing!...Milt
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 8/1/2013 10:47:00 AM
HAHAHAHA.......... thanks !!
Date: 11/8/2011 5:41:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Saanvi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 8:08:00 AM
Very cute and funny :)
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