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The Lucky Guy

He looked out, With an open mouth. A fair maiden, Kept his eyes looking. He wished to talk, But words eluded him. Afraid to be mocked, He paused the film. Guess what happened, The girl turned her eyes. 'Gbim gbim' ; his heart. But,she wasn't looking. c.2017

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Date: 7/29/2017 11:04:00 AM
What a great poem. Welcome to poetry soup
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