The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

The Luckiest Man On Earth

The way he hobbles make you wince
His eyes tearing up with each lurch forward
As he grinds out his daily two-block marathon
   There he goes now, the luckiest man on Earth

Gingerly, deliberately, carefully -- grunting away
He labors up the five steps to his front door
Pausing at the top to congratulate himself -- Oy!
   There he stands, the luckiest man on Earth

Crossing the threshold, his faithful wife greets him
Cheerfully, asking how it went today and how he felt
"Never better, my darling!" the perspiration-tinged reply
   Another blue-ribbbon day for the luckiest man on Earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krutsinger Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Attitude is everything, and this resonates loudly and clearly in this poem. Not only is he the luckiest man, she is the luckest woman for knowing him.
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:20 PM
Hadn't looked at it that way (i.e., luckiest woman), but you're right. Thanks for the insight! Best wishes, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:22 PM
He sounds lucky to be alive, but I admire his determination. Tom.
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:20 PM
You're right. He is lucky to be alive. I know, because I know him all too well...………...
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace