The loyal to others, disloyal to you

"Do you trust eyes?" Asked they
She had a sketchy answer, hard to convey
Still she tried and began in a way... 

"Observe your mind 
When it tries to guide 
every part in you to take up the ride
The ride in which your parts try to hide
the thoughts that come to you every night
Staring at the ceiling with switched off light 
Cause in the dark, hidden is your sight
this epitome may seem unsatisfied
So why not fade to prudence and pride

Starting with neither ascending nor  descending
The buccal cavity, best at defending
the hidden truth which can cause the ending
and so crashed the utterance from landing
Tears fall off from the chin to your nose
and you run in the corners 
where no one goes
Enough of tears! 
Your nose even sighs 
Not to emit sound 
that's what it tries
More of the canvas, are your mastermind lips
Aren't they halting the so called apocalypse? 
spot where it's painted, that fake smile of yours
But if you know you know! your rage never roars

The loyal ones here are taking an end
to let the disloyal perform the work of the sand
The melancholy and the seashore go hand in hand
and inevitably converge with that loyal sand
who, no matter what choose to stand
For someone who is as if a gland
This phenomenon is like an art
the one who unveils what's in your heart
Doesn't really cares about tearing apart
disloyal to you, betray while pretending
It's right there inside! How much you fear ending"

She took a pause and now questions were crossed

"Now I want you to utter
About what would you prefer
From the gullible heart
Between loving or hating that galactic art? 
The loyal to others, disloyal to you
Revealed every emotion without passing any clue
The loyal to others, disloyal to you
Will only decide whether it's ending or the beginning very new
The loyal to others, disloyal to you
For someone so special, can even fight with queue
The loyal to others, disloyal to you
Curtailed the mess which you never knew
Those irises which denied to conceal what you've been through
Not a true blue
The loyal to others, disloyal to you
Enough of lies! 
When there it is, your 'galactic eyes'
pure as porcelain with intertwined pride
Even after bearing the dust inside
The vanity in them cause they never lied
Do I really trust them, now can't you decide? "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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