The Low Hanging Sun

I went to take out the trash,
the good trash, glass and paper
destined for a re-incarnation
and as I stepped outside,
thee air cool and pearly white,
the low hanging sun smiles,
throws a late afternoon warmth
over me like a blanket of silk....

For a moment I stopped to think,
then thanked the low hanging sun
for being there, the last defense 
against a cold deep unto death.

In our immense Universe, wallless,
ever expanding, is mostly night,
utter and fearsome darkness, all
pitch-black and cold, a coldness
beyond comprehension or life--
so the light and heat of every 
myriad star is precious, precious....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Alex Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 6:05 PM
Great work. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Thank you so much, C.A.
Kauffman Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Precious indeed dear friend. Our sun is a truly amazing miracle growing life in the darkness of our vast universe! Congratulations on yet another slice of your wisdom and observation! Blessings!
Carber Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 1:45 PM
Thank you, Sam
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 4:28 AM
Wow brilliant and stellar, indeed the heat from stars is God's gift and is precious that you write of like you did with gratitude. Kudos!!!
Carber Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Indeed! And thank you
Brewer Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 1:26 AM
Your words are cool and clear as the winter sun, and shine on observable truths. Beautiful images described with directness and skill. Lovely poem, Len.
Carber Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 8:37 AM
Thank you Geoff-- I wasn't quite sure this poem 'worked' but now I feel better, my friend-- and may your 2021 be far, far better than its antecedent!
Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Beautiful write, LJC.
Carber Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 12:17 PM
Thank Vijay-- a review from you always means a lot-- have a very creative and blessed 2021!
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