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The Low Hanging Sun

I went to take out the trash, the good trash, glass and paper destined for a re-incarnation and as I stepped outside, thee air cool and pearly white, the low hanging sun smiles, throws a late afternoon warmth over me like a blanket of silk.... For a moment I stopped to think, then thanked the low hanging sun for being there, the last defense against a cold deep unto death. In our immense Universe, wallless, ever expanding, is mostly night, utter and fearsome darkness, all pitch-black and cold, a coldness beyond comprehension or life-- so the light and heat of every myriad star is precious, precious....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/24/2022 6:05:00 PM
Great work. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/25/2022 5:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, C.A.
Date: 7/22/2021 11:00:00 AM
Precious indeed dear friend. Our sun is a truly amazing miracle growing life in the darkness of our vast universe! Congratulations on yet another slice of your wisdom and observation! Blessings!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/22/2021 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Sam
Date: 2/20/2021 4:28:00 AM
Wow brilliant and stellar, indeed the heat from stars is God's gift and is precious that you write of like you did with gratitude. Kudos!!!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/21/2021 8:10:00 AM
Indeed! And thank you
Date: 12/30/2020 1:26:00 AM
Your words are cool and clear as the winter sun, and shine on observable truths. Beautiful images described with directness and skill. Lovely poem, Len.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/2/2021 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Geoff-- I wasn't quite sure this poem 'worked' but now I feel better, my friend-- and may your 2021 be far, far better than its antecedent!
Date: 12/25/2020 1:00:00 PM
Beautiful write, LJC.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/26/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thank Vijay-- a review from you always means a lot-- have a very creative and blessed 2021!

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