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The Lover

The lover, bold beyond his years, loved when she held him by his ears, as in their bless'ed mingling place, he kissed her as he washed his face. For ever he'd have stayed down there, but for his need to rise for air. And at the end when they both rose, up from their lust to put on clothes, he saw within her looking glass, his naked image, sagging ****, and knew his past did best his future. Or they don't make mirrors like they useter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/8/2013 3:29:00 PM
YES! (so that makes half of them resounding yeses and a few of the other half very good possibilities) I think I only nixed three. Gotta get upstairs now. See ya later.
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Date: 5/1/2013 11:01:00 PM
aha, this looks like the title of one that you told me about!! oh my goodness, this is FUNNY. you sure came up with a doozy with this one, REd.
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:23:00 PM
I loved it!
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Date: 3/20/2013 3:02:00 PM
Congrats, Red. Nice going. Well done. Ralph
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Date: 3/20/2013 1:29:00 PM
Love the ending, perfect! Jen
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations red....I have one of these mirrors..haha...Donna
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Date: 3/20/2013 5:06:00 AM
Red congratulations. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/18/2013 6:30:00 PM
Red, thanks for the chuckle and awesome poem.. always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2013 6:02:00 PM
Love the ending line! Congratulations on your win, Red!
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Date: 3/16/2013 8:34:00 AM
This one brought a smile ... and a dimple to my cheeks... Terry
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Date: 3/13/2013 4:51:00 PM
Love it ,,, thank you for reading The wind is calling ;},,, yes I do have lots more old ones. I always post the dates
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Date: 3/9/2013 3:41:00 AM
hahahaha. Seriously funny and kinda blue (wink, wink). I loved every word. :)
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Date: 3/7/2013 9:14:00 AM
ooooo.... what years have in store for us... hope the mirrors aim was way off...:-)..pd
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Date: 3/4/2013 3:38:00 AM
Well....now you will have to turn around and let us be the judge ;-) ....Wait!! Let me grab my wine first lol :-)
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