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The Lovely Majestic Sky

The majestic sky is in plain view It's lovely yet mysterious Flowers below dance to the wind's soft beat As giant oaks sing nearby nature has a great band Beautiful eagles glide across the azure sky like skilled pilots, they were so free Next I saw a pigeon tango in mid air so breathtaking for all to see Grey clouds start to sing then crystal droplets descend so hard yet gentle on earth's abundant soil that was so very thirsty Contest:The It takes Four Poetry Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings Third Place 08-12-16

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/23/2016 11:11:00 AM

Alexis, congratulations on your win very descriptive Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 8/22/2016 1:33:00 PM

Alexis, a big CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/22/2016 1:54:00 PM

Hi BW, Thank you so much. You held a good contest. Thanks for my placement. It was pleasure to participate in your contest:-)Alexis

Lu Loo

Date: 8/22/2016 12:29:00 PM

Alexis, one of my favorites in this contest...a beautiful poem from a lovely lady...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/17/2016 11:30:00 AM

Beautiful poem on natural phenomena drawn with beautiful colors. My favorite. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/16/2016 4:07:00 AM

Wow...sweeping imagery, I do love nature pieces and this is gorgeous! The striking format increases the beauty of your words..this is excellent writing and a joy to read :-) my best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Jan Allison

Date: 8/14/2016 1:44:00 PM

You did a great job Alexis, such beautiful imagery:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/13/2016 4:12:00 PM

Alexis - you did a grand job! I'm not counting syllables, but I know you did. I'm referring to the poetic content - truly most enjoyable. Sweetie, the title must be 4 words, I believe - check me out. Good luck with this beauty ... CayCay

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/13/2016 4:20:00 PM

Hi CayCay, Thank you so much. I will go check. I appreciate that you support my art:-)Alexis

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/13/2016 1:16:00 PM

Hi Alexis, good luck in the contest. This is a beautiful four form write on the majestic sky and it does become majestic when looked at through your eyes. Your song plays right into the heart and beautiful visions play through the mind. This is an excellent piece. This has to be a seven. Once more, good luck in the contest Alexis. Have a good day. Hugs....Mike. XX

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/13/2016 8:05:00 AM

The symphony of life expressed through a plethora of poetic forms dear, Alexis! Well done!