Alexis Y. Poet Verse

The Lovely Majestic Sky

The majestic sky is in plain view
                                  It's lovely yet mysterious

                       Flowers below dance to the wind's soft beat
                                    As giant oaks sing nearby
                                       nature has a great band
    
                        Beautiful eagles glide across the azure sky
                                like skilled pilots, they were so free
                                Next I saw a pigeon tango in mid air
                                      so breathtaking for all to see

                                         Grey clouds start to sing
                                     then crystal droplets descend
                                               so hard yet gentle  
                                         on earth's abundant soil   
                                           that was so very thirsty                                                                                                      

                                           

                                                     

                                 Contest:The It takes Four Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsor: Broken Wings
                                 Third Place
                                          


                                          
                                          
                                                              
                                

                                          
            
                                          08-12-16

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Eve Roper August 23, 2016 at 11:11 AM Alexis, congratulations on your win very descriptive Hugs Eve

Constance La France August 22, 2016 at 1:33 PM Alexis, a big CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~ Alexis Y. August 22, 2016 at 1:54 PM Hi BW, Thank you so much. You held a good contest. Thanks for my placement. It was pleasure to participate in your contest:-)Alexis

Beautiful Scars August 22, 2016 at 12:29 PM Alexis, one of my favorites in this contest...a beautiful poem from a lovely lady...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Bl Devnath August 17, 2016 at 11:30 AM Beautiful poem on natural phenomena drawn with beautiful colors. My favorite. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie August 16, 2016 at 4:07 AM Wow...sweeping imagery, I do love nature pieces and this is gorgeous! The striking format increases the beauty of your words..this is excellent writing and a joy to read :-) my best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Jan Allison August 14, 2016 at 1:44 PM You did a great job Alexis, such beautiful imagery:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin August 13, 2016 at 4:12 PM Alexis - you did a grand job! I'm not counting syllables, but I know you did. I'm referring to the poetic content - truly most enjoyable. Sweetie, the title must be 4 words, I believe - check me out. Good luck with this beauty ... CayCay Alexis Y. August 13, 2016 at 4:20 PM Hi CayCay, Thank you so much. I will go check. I appreciate that you support my art:-)Alexis

Vladislav Raven August 13, 2016 at 1:16 PM Hi Alexis, good luck in the contest. This is a beautiful four form write on the majestic sky and it does become majestic when looked at through your eyes. Your song plays right into the heart and beautiful visions play through the mind. This is an excellent piece. This has to be a seven. Once more, good luck in the contest Alexis. Have a good day. Hugs....Mike. XX

Demetrios Trifiatis August 13, 2016 at 8:05 AM The symphony of life expressed through a plethora of poetic forms dear, Alexis! Well done!