The Loveliest Holiday's Gift

Warm heart wrapped
in garlands
replaces star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest "Haiku Me A Christmas Tree" Andrew. Love, Carol
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Great words for a Senryu,Congrats on your HM Andrew.Teresa
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Many congrats Andrew on picking up coveted HM in the winners list with this beautiful entry in Andrea's contest. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 8:13 AM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Andrea's cool contest with this excellent and expressive entry my friend.. enjoy a special honor today with luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved HM win in the contest of Andrea, Andrew
Neels Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 2:41 AM
Congratulations on your HM in the contest ;-) Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Congratulations, Andrew. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations for your HM in my contest with this heart "warming" senryu! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Nice write passionate write replacing the star, Good luck, Andrew
Devonshire Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 10:39 AM
So warm and comforting, Andrew! I hope you have entered this in Andrea's contest because it would surely be a winner. Love and peace, Carolyn
La France Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 9:21 AM
this is really sweet and beautiful and full of love, I just really like it, best of luck in the contest~~
Falotico Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Nice senryu and a beauiful scene..
Roberts Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:24 PM
beautiful senryu
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