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The Love Story of Kacha and Devayani 9

NOTE: Sorry that in spite of my best efforts &
attempts the Poetry lines are breaking with extra
spaces between lines here and there. This is  
happening placing the Poem on PS. I have no idea 
why it is happening. Earlier I have even deleted the 
contents and have reposted the poem with almost 
no results.
Ravindra K Kapoor
18th Aug. 2014

 
The  Love  Story  of  Kacha  And  Devayani  9

Devayani 

And you remember Kacha, 
That in the season of autumn,
You often used to get lost,
In praising my beauty
In your poems and songs,
With the beauty 
Of your dear Nature, 
While watching the splendid treasure, 
Of the forests,
And its falling leaves. 30

How such alluring images,
Which were so sweetly carved,
Deep in your heart and soul,
Have suddenly vanished,
From your mind and heart,
Like the glimmer 
Of a summer clouds,
Dear Kacha?  31

Try to remember Kacha, 
Those strong gush of, 
Autumn winds,
Which used to take away, 
The half hanging dry leaves,
From trees,
Creating the most pleasing, 
Musical sounds, 
Of the flying and falling leaves, 
In the calm and quietness,
Of our lovely forest
Where we both 
Used to spend lot of our time
In searching and collecting
The wonderful herbs as needed
By my father & your Guru
For making his magical remedies. 32

But in those moments,
You were often more fascinated 
By the beauty, 
Of those few golden leaves, 
Fallen from the trees, 
But staying in my hairs,
While kissing and playing 
With the disturbed locks of hairs,
Which always inspired you
To create, 
Some of yours most fabulous songs,
In praising the splendid beauty,
Of your dear Nature
And your beloved. 34

Can you recall sing those lines  
Of your sweet song 
Dear Kacha
Song lines Part 1
“My beloved’s face and beauty,
Has  magical charms, 
To attract anything,
In this wonderful season, 
Of Autumn,
The shining tiny golden leaves, 
Have  come,
Not only to stay with her,
But to decorate, 
Her long golden black hairs,
As a crown, 
On Nature’s most beautiful Queen.” 35

Ravindra
Kanpur India 17th Aug. 2014
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Date: 8/31/2014 4:38:00 AM
Beautifully captured on paper Ravindra. This is a true romance of great interest. I have enjoyed this passage immensely. Verlena
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/31/2014 7:41:00 AM
I am so grateful for your kind comments dear friend. For a moment I had a feeling that perhaps on Poetry Soup there is no liking for such love poems. Your comments would help me to restore my ideas to finish it as an unprecedented love series in next few more episodes. Thank you once again and for your beautiful comments. More on your page. Love and best wishes always…Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/18/2014 2:48:00 AM
Yet another beautiful write Ravindra ! I always await reading ur amazing work! Bravo well done!
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/18/2014 6:50:00 AM
Thanks for your kind & precious words. I am trying my best to make it a unique Love Story. The current trend of appreciation for such series Poems are not much on PS, unlike the previous years when such works were more in appreciation. Still the beauty of this story has encouraged me to take it towards its conclusion. More on your Page. L & B W always..Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/18/2014 12:35:00 AM
I am quite hopeful that for those who take interest in series Poems, this Love Story of Kacha and Devayani would be getting more and more romantic and interesting, while unveiling those hidden beauty of Nature and Love, which we often miss in our modern life. Your views would be highly appreciated on the progress of this story. With Love a best wishes for all the viewers...Ravindra K Kapoor
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