The Love Story of Kacha and Devayani 8

The Love Story of
Kacha and Devayani 
-8

NOTE: SORRY IF YOU
FIND BROKEN LINES 
WHICH ARE OFTEN
HAPPENING DUE TO
SOME
TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON
MANY PARTS
OF THIS LOVE POEM
SERIES. 
RAVINDRA K KAPOOR 

Devayani's dialogue
continues in Stanza
24  

Devayani 

Today you want to
leave, 
This place Kacha, 
After taking, 
The priceless
knowledge, 
Of the secrets of
immortality,
From my father,
Who never imparted, 
This secret
knowledge, 
To anyone else, 
Except you. 24

Kacha

How one can forget,
 
Such lovely moments,

Which are so
refreshing and
alive,
In your memory and
words,
Dear Devayani.  
Such moments dwell, 
In our mind and
heart,
Till we live and
breathe,
On this Earth. 25

In my mind, 
The images, 
Of these beautiful
moments,
Have only got dim,
Because of the
brightness, 
Of the light of my, 
Newly gained
knowledge,
Dear Devayani. 26

Devayani 

Try to recollect
Kacha,
The summer and rainy
days,
When we used to sit,
For hours,
Under the shade, 
Of that big Banyan
tree,
While watching the
beauty, 
Of those yellow and
red lotus,
Which always
appeared, 
To be smiling in the
lake,
When the early
morning beams,
Kiss them to wake
them up. 27

And do you remember,

How in the rainy
days,
You used to praise, 
The beauty of my
golden black hairs, 
With that of the
hanging dark clouds,

Which appears to be
happy in waiting,
To shower, 
Their rains of love,
On us. 28

And to you in those
moments, 
My smiles appeared
to be more,
Pleasing and
beautiful, 
Than the colorful
rainbow,
Which used to appear
in the sky,
With all its beauty
and grandeur, 
To win your heart,
In its favor. 29

Ravindra
Kanpur India 16th
Aug. 2014

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Date: 8/16/2014 4:37:00 AM
Love ur write n the way u did it Ravindra!A Wonderful masterpiece!
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Date: 8/16/2014 7:54:00 AM
I am really grateful to you Dr. Upma for your kind and precious comment. Your words would definitely help me a lot to give this love story a very deserving place as a love story of unparallel beauty. More on your page. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/16/2014 12:59:00 AM
The story of Kacha and Devayani still continues with more love from the innocent heart of Devayani who is trying her best to bring back the lost images in the mind and heart of her love Kacha. My special thanks to all those viewers who are taking interest in this Love Poem although they are not the members of Poetry Soup. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra K Kapoor
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