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The Love I Once Had

Smelling his cologne in my room thinking about how I use to make love to you staring at his picture and it made me feel that love was so real and true Now, I have to live without you The love I once had It was so good that it was clear and understood when I was near you it felt so cool to be in love with you Why is so hard to get pass this? you were the love of my life and I like it then a expiration date show its face and you will never return to your place Now, what I am suppose to do without you The love I once had It was so good that it was clear and understood when I was near you it felt so cool to be in love with you Can anyone tell how long this will last? I'm hurting so bad that I think I will go mad Please! Can someone help me so I can live I want the pain to go away, so I can feel the love like I, once had with him The love I once had It was so good that it was clear and understood when I was near you it felt so cool to be in love with you He always said to me, if his love doesn’t last for long, go on and live like nothing happen how can I do that, when his love was fantastic and then you went up above and that’s long lasting The love I once had It was so good that it was clear and understood when I was near you it felt so cool to be in love with you The love I once had was sweet like assorted candy Just like our emotions and it felt so good, it was like we took a potion Now, its hard to continue life in the motions because God has chosen, the love I once had Max

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Date: 2/1/2012 5:53:00 AM
You know everyone must decide whether to accept the softer, gentler, longer lasting and sometimes infinite love of a true friend over what often...often is no more than chemistry to procreat, passion, lust..the intensity of the latter is LIKE A DRUG. Occasionally, we find passion and friendship together but it is so hard to tell! If we could tell that is the person to stay with forever. [Everytime I see your name I miss my mother Maxine [she has passed on] You keep learning those forms! L & L
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:45:00 AM
Beautiful poem written Max - I like it alot. oxox love Anne-Lise
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