The Love I Made

The love I made
Through my thoughts I created you
Out of you came love
Though the love couldn’t exist alone
Out of you came me
Together the love grew

When love mature feelings were born
A feeling that change my thoughts
When my thought exhausted the heart took control
A heart so pure yet never hurt before

When the heart was hurt darkness took control
From darkness grief seize
Out of grief hate emerge 
But the hate grew old and I only saw you and i
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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John Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Welcome and congratz that your poem fro having your poem featured. Enjoy your stay here as I did. Nice poem
Mcunu Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:53 AM
thank you
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June 9, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Zakhe, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 6:24 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, zakhe
Mcunu Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:53 AM
thank you
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 11:58 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Zakhe :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 9:07 AM
ZAKHE, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Mcunu Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 9:31 PM
I am really happy to have meet people like you i forsee a very fruitful journey, i am still not familar but i will catch up soon. thanks
Gibson Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Zakhe. I enjoyed reading this first poem posted. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
A  Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Zakhe,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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