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The Love I Made

The love I made Through my thoughts I created you Out of you came love Though the love couldn’t exist alone Out of you came me Together the love grew When love mature feelings were born A feeling that change my thoughts When my thought exhausted the heart took control A heart so pure yet never hurt before When the heart was hurt darkness took control From darkness grief seize Out of grief hate emerge But the hate grew old and I only saw you and i

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Klim John

Date: 6/11/2014 4:30:00 PM

Welcome and congratz that your poem fro having your poem featured. Enjoy your stay here as I did. Nice poem

Zakhe Michael Mcunu
Date: 6/13/2014 8:53:00 AM

thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 7:46:00 AM

Zakhe, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2014 6:24:00 AM

A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, zakhe

Zakhe Michael Mcunu
Date: 6/13/2014 8:53:00 AM

thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2014 11:58:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Zakhe :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 9:07:00 AM

ZAKHE, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Zakhe Michael Mcunu

Date: 6/7/2014 9:31:00 PM

I am really happy to have meet people like you i forsee a very fruitful journey, i am still not familar but i will catch up soon. thanks

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/7/2014 1:50:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Zakhe. I enjoyed reading this first poem posted. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.

Skat A

Date: 6/6/2014 7:46:00 AM

Zakhe,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT