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The love dressed in black

The lady walks away With thoughts clogged of grey She couldn't stand there any longer Watching him go underground It was dead scilent, not a sound His motionless body on his death bed She cried tears of death and sorrow Knowing for him, there is no tommorow Her love thrown away like nothing No one knew who she was Because she had only met him the other day when they fell in love at first sight The bullet that once saved her Killed her first love, in a shock and a blur He bled out and died in her arms Why didn't things work out that day? Why did things end up that way? She walked away, a lady dressed in black

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 11/3/2014 4:56:00 AM
wow this is actually what love can bring but time can just take it away just like that...i love this well dressed poem of love.
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Date: 10/30/2014 12:08:00 AM
Hi Kajika.. Powerful, introspective write! Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Date: 10/26/2014 12:25:00 PM
deep touching very beautifully painted piece bless you kajika
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:38:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Kajika - I choose your first moving and very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2014 8:13:00 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 10/22/2014 5:08:00 AM
that is a sad story and the feeling of a ghost was coming around
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Date: 10/22/2014 2:18:00 AM
well written. welcome to the soup. hope you write more great poetry
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:06:00 AM
A sad story.Enjoyed.Thanks.
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