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The Lost Ship

It's been down in the ocean for many many years Drowned and lost family members so many tears Now filled with lost treasure and a story to tell The people on that ship went through pure hell From the moment it was sinking they knew it wasbad Thinking of their family members at home knowing they were sad the ship only leaves memories of time gone by All we have left is photos to look at and cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/7/2010 4:51:00 AM
Nice poem, I like to see them rhyme, well done. Constructive comments - line 6 is too long (in my opinion) spoiled the flow a little family members is such a long phrase. Still a nice poem though
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